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Should people's salaries be based on their job performance?

     I think people’s salaries should be based on their job performance. There are two reasons for this.
     The first reason is that people who achieve good results are very important for companies. Paying a high salary to someone who does not produce results is a waste of money. Some people say that Japanese companies have grown by giving higher salaries to employees who work longer, but recently, such companies have been struggling to grow.
     The second reason is that it motivates people who achieve good results. If the system rewards people with more money for working harder, everyone will be encouraged to do their best. Some may feel sorry for those who cannot perform well, but I think those people should find jobs that suit them better. In this way, a system where salaries are based on performance is good for both companies and employees.
     That is why I believe salaries should be based on job performance. (157 words)

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