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TOPIC
Should the government do more to encourage young people to vote in elections?

POINTS
● Freedom of choice
● Social responsibility
● Taxes
● Trust in politicians

     I think the government should do more to encourage young people to vote. I have two reasons.
     First, voting is a kind of social responsibility, even for young people. Everyone lives in this society, so everyone should think about making it better and take part in elections. Some people say that even if young people vote, the results will not change because there are many older voters. But if more young people vote, their opinions can be heard more than now.
     Second, the government can use taxes to make a better voting system. For example, if online voting becomes possible, more young people may want to vote. Some people may think that a vote from someone who only votes online is not important, but that is not true. Every vote is equal and important.
     For these reasons, I believe the government should do more to help young people join elections. (150 words)