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Do you think each nation should have its own army?

     I think each country should have its own army. Here are two reasons why.
     First, it makes the country safe. When a country has its own army, other countries will avoid attacking it because they know it can fight back. Some people say having an army is too expensive and it can make life harder for people, but safety is the most important thing.
     Second, it helps keep world peace. If each country has its own army, attacking becomes harder, and this means there are fewer fights between countries. Some people believe that if no country had an army, there would be no fights. But this is just an ideal, and weaker countries might get attacked.
     For these reasons, I believe each country should have its own army. (126 words)


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