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TOPIC
Should people stop using goods that are made from animals?

POINTS
● Animal rights
● Endangered species
● Product quality
● Tradition


     I think people should not stop using products made from animals. There are two reasons for this.
     The first reason is that animal products are part of tradition. For example, people have used them for a long time, and they are important in many cultures. Some people think using animal products is wrong, but if we use products from animals that have already died and appreciate them, it should be okay.
     The second reason is that animal products have good quality. For example, coats made from animal fur are very warm, and real leather is strong and lasts a long time. Some people say we should use artificial materials, but they break easily and create more trash, which is bad for the environment.
     For these reasons, I do not think people should stop using products made from animals.